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cool! it woulda been cool to see this in the story but like you said they were moving way too fast
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i love both. But the top one is amazing... I'm all for secret kisses, affairs, and drama.. ;)
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although the were moving too i love both hahah
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i love these outtakes. they are sooooooooooo good
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Who Would Have Thought Outtakes 2Enjoy!!!!
Who Would Have Thought Outtake for Chapter 12(Who Would Have Thought Outtakes 2) Story: Zac and Josh rescue Hayley from the girl slumber party where she was held hostage. Before she was rescued, Hayley admitted her best kiss was in the back of someone's car...the accidental kiss she had with Josh that was a secret. The girls spilled that out and Josh freaked out for a second before Hayley lied saying it was with Zac. Josh is upset with his reaction about it and is questioning whether or not to believe Hayley's statement Warning: This is an early chapter therefore it wasn't written in the way I write now. Enjoy!!!! Josh P.O.V. Zac, Hayley, and I stayed an additional hour at the slumber party. The girls cooked us breakfast and joked around with us, but my mind wasn't in it. Hayley refused to look me the eyes and I was not surprised. Her deep, dark secret was now known to five people. I still can't believe that she said that. She told me that she had no feelings for me, that the kiss meant nothing to her, that it was an accident. But now, just staring at her I couldn't believe that I bought it. I mean, she freaking kissed me back. We were walking to my car. Zac became his annoying self and now he and Hayley were walking hand to hand to the car, Zac grinning and me silently fuming. Did he always have to hold her hand? "In the back of a car," he grinned. "I don't remember that." "It...it was a long time ago," I heard Hayley answer. "Apparently, not long enough since you still remember," joked Zac. "Are you sure it wasn't a dream. I don't remember a time we made out-" "Zac," she scolded. "Josh is here." "Like he doesn't already know," he snickered. I resisted the urge to ball my hands into a fist. "I didn't wake up at nine in the morning to deal with your ego," I snapped getting my car keys from my pocket. "Someone's a pick cranky in the morning," sing-song Zac. I slammed the passenger door open. "Get in and shut up," I snapped again. "Hey, don't get-" began Zac. "My car, my rules," I growled. "What's up with you?" questioned Zac. Before I could answer, Zac's phone rang. He glanced at it. "It's mom," he announced. He picked it up. "Hey mom...what?...oh I just left to pick up Hayley." Zac headed back towards Bekah's house, still talking to mom. I turned to Hayley who was glaring at me. "What is wrong with you. Why are you being so mean to Zac?" I didn't mean to make her mad. I was just so angry with Zac that I didn't even consider Hayley's feelings. "Sorry," I apologized. "Sorry," she exclaimed. "Sorry? You think that word is going to fix everything. What is up with you?" Did she honestly not know what was going on with me? Wasn't it obvious to her? "None of your damn business," I answered. "Hey," Hayley warned, looking me up and down. "Don't talk like that to me." "I can do whatever I want," I argued "Not with me here," she shouted. "Please, you don't have that power," I lied. Of course she did, she had it ever since the incident. "Just because you're in a pissy mood doesn't mean you can take it out on me or Zac," she told me. She was glaring at me. I didn't mean to get her angrier, but her and Zac...together...I hated it. "Can you guess why I'm in a pissy mood Hayley?" I asked. "Can you guess? Do you even give a damn? "Of course I give a damn" she answered. "You're my friend." "Yeah," I said. "Well friends don't lie to their friends about their feelings." "What are you..." she stopped. I guess she finally realized why I was so mad. "I was just kidding Josh. I hadn't meant it," she said softly. "You said that before," I murmured. "I thought they were asking about-" I put up my hand. "Enough," I interjected. "I've had enough with your lies." Hayley seemed hurt. "They were asking...they were asking about my worst kissing experience," she stammered. "I didn't...I didn't want to hurt you so I told you guys that it was the best kiss and..." "What a great way to boost my ego," I said sarcastically. "Do you honestly think that I'm a bad kisser?" "We are not having this conversation," stated Hayley looking away. "I refuse." "Fine," I said. "Then will." I turned Hayley towards me and crashed her lips to mine. Hayley's P.O.V. Oh god, I can't believe I almost forgot the feeling, the feeling of Josh's luscious lips on mine. It was almost how I remembered it, only better. Josh grabbed my waist and softly pushed me to his car, kissing me deeper. "Hayley," he whispered on my lips. "Josh," I whispered back. He kissed me again and this time I felt his tongue touch mine. I always thought that French kissing would be disgusting and couldn't understand how couples could stand to do it; the thought use to make me shudder. But now, experiencing with Josh gave me so much pleasure that my knees felt weak and I lost balanced and fell. "Hayley," he cried. "Hayley, are you okay?" "I'm fine," I answered, embarrassing. "I just lost my balanced." "How did you lose your balance?" Josh asked. "You were leaning on the car." I looked down before I answered, speaking softly. "This now replaces the best kiss I have ever experienced." Josh grinned. "Would you like an encore?" His face was now only inches away, I closed the gap. Zac P.O.V. "Okay mom...I got it...bye," I said quickly as I closed my cell phone. My mom was being over-bearing again and as much as I appreciate it sometimes, it could get out of hand like now. She was so upset that I left without telling her that she was grounding me for the rest of the weekend and could only see Hayley in the afternoons. What a party pooper. I made my way back to Josh's car; I wonder if he calmed down yet. When I reached the car, I couldn't find Hayley or Josh anywhere. I sighed. I hope he didn't take her take his anger out on her; he looked like he wanted to kill me. "Zac," called Hayley. She and Josh were running back to me, both out of breath and flushing bright red. "Where were you? I thought Josh murdered you?" "He would never do that," said Hayley with a smile. Josh grinned. Was I missing something? "Ready to go?" asked Josh jiggling the car keys. "Shot-gun," yelled Hayley running to the passenger seat. Josh shook his head. "What's up with you guys?" I asked curiously. "You're acting like....children or something." Josh face suddenly turned grim. "You'll find out later," he answered coolly and made his way to his car. Reason for Deletion: I felt like they were moving too fast, so I took it out. ==================================================================== Outtake for Chapter 13 Summary: Takes place after the slumber party incident. The outtake I had posted above hadn't happened. Josh is conflicted with his feelings for Hayley and when he he find his girlfriend, Tabitha, in his room, he starts to make out with her trying to push his feelings away. Things start to get hot and heavy, and when articles of clothing start to come off, Hayley and Zac open the door and spot them. Josh is surprised and Hayley is horrified. Hayley P.O.V. I ran down the stairs, too upset to even look at him. I ran outside and looked around for any way that I could get out of here. "Hayley," called Zac running after me. "Hayley, where are you going?" I didn't answer him. Tears were falling from my eyes and I couldn't stop them. What was wrong with me? So what, Josh was kissing Tabby? So what, they were half-naked? So what, that if we didn't come earlier it could have gone further. So what...? "Hayley?" called Zac softly finally reaching me. He hugged me tightly. "What's wrong?" I was shaking terribly. "I don't know," I answered truthfully. "Does this have anything to do with Josh...Tabby...last August?" "Au...August," I stammered. "They...they...they triggered something a memory to me about the divorce. I'm sorry." It was a lie. I just didn't want Zac to worry about me. He would not let go seeing me cry, and knowing that I cried while watching Tabby and Josh...god, I can't think about it. I felt another tear escape. "Hayley," shouted Josh running down the stairs with his shirt askew and rushing on putting on his belt. "Hayley, wait." "Get away from me," I shouted. "Get away from me Joshua." Josh stopped on his tracks. "Hayley?" he said softly. I broke down. My heart ached so much that I thought it would burst. I felt Josh hug me. "Hayley, calm down. Please, it's okay." I wrapped my arms around Josh and put my head on his shoulder. What was wrong with me? Josh P.O.V. Hayley calm down automatically to my touch. I glanced at Zac who had a worried look. "Hayley, calm down. Please, it's okay." She wrapped her warms around me and put her head in my shoulder. "I'm sorry," she whispered. I stroked her hair. "It's okay," I murmured. "Just stop crying." She hugged me tighter, like she didn't want to let me go. I glanced back at Zac who was pouting. I guess he wanted to be the one to comfort Hayley. "Josh," called Tabitha, walking to the yard. Hayley stiffen and I knew that if I didn't do something soon, she would cry again. "I'll call you later," I told Tabby quickly. Tabby narrowed her eyes. She looked from Hayley to me, but didn't say anything for a whole minute. "Fine," she muttered. Hayley squeezed me tighter; I could feel the lack of oxygen but didn't say anything. Hayley was the one who need my full attention. Once Tabby drove away, she relaxed a little. "I must be nuts," I heard her murmur. "And why is that?" I asked. Hayley didn't answer, but just hugged me tighter. "Um...Zac," I started. Zac stood up straight, ready for duty. "Get Hayley a bottle of water and some Advil." "Advil?" Zac questioned. "She'll probably get a headache later," I explained. Zac nodded in agreement as he headed inside. "Hayley?" I asked softly. "Do you want to go inside?" She shook her head no. "I want...I want to stay here for a while if that's okay." "Okay," I agreed. "Whatever you want." Holding her felt so right, like I belonged there. I know that hugs and kisses from Tabby was nothing compared to this. I looked down at Hayley was sniffling a little bit. She was such a strong person, what in the world could have make her break down? "Hayley?" I asked softly. "Are you okay?" "No," she answered truthfully. "What's wrong? Is there anything I could do to help? Would you like me to beat someone up?" She laughed at that. "I don't think you can beat this person up." "So, you're crying because of a person," I mused looking down at her. (Added an ending to this outtake since it was incomplete. Here it is...) Hayley glared up at me. "Just shut up and continue to hug me." "With pleasure," I told her as I held her in my arms tighter. Zac came back with the bottle of water and Advil and Hayley took it gratefully. However, when she was done she made her way back into my arms, almost suffocating me. I laughed. "Gosh Hayles," Zac muttered, looking down on the ground. "You sure do know how to make your boyfriend feel appreciated." Hayley bit her lip as she looked down, looking a bit ashamed. "Come on Zac," I told him, giving him a hard look. "How can you make her feel bad when she's already down? What kind of boyfriend are you?" Zac glared at me. "It's okay," Hayley said as she unwrapped her arms around me, avoiding eye contact. "He is kind of right. I guess because you have the elder brother thing going on, I went to you. Sorry about that." Zac's eyes lighten up when Hayley held his hand and I resisted the urge to turn my hands into fists. I pushed my uneasiness aside as I watched Zac usher Hayley back to the house. And I also pushed away my emptiness when Hayley's hand unwrapped her arms around me. Gosh, what the heck is wrong with me? Reason for Deletion: Same as the one above. They were moving a little bit too fast.
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